This week, we each received 2-3 pieces of feedback from our classmates on our visual infographics. Here's an overview of what my peers thought of my proposal:
"Your website looks very professional and I can tell you worked hard on your infographic. Some things you can work on are describing which ingredients you will need and where you will get them."
My response: The ingredients I will potentially need are almond flour, powdered sugar, gel food dye, egg whites, sugar, and flavorings as well as a filling (buttercream, jam, icing, etc.). I am planning on buying these ingredients at Target, Trader Joe's, Safeway, and/or amazon.com.
"I really like your idea and I think that it's very creative. One question I have is how this takes courage. Are you going to give some to a food bank? Do a bake sale and donate the earnings to charity? or something else?"
My response: I have tried many times in the past to make successful macarons- and failed. Since then I haven't really tried anything very ambitious, so I decided this courage project would take courage because I haven't had much of that to pursue this goal. Also, I'm not planning to donate any earnings to organizations. Learning this skill is more for my benefit in baking experience.
"I really love how you were really clear with what you hope to accomplish, and how you are going to get there. I also love how your visual is appropriate for the topic, and how it adds to your big idea. The only suggestion I have is that: maybe you could make your font bolder/larger, or easier to read. It wasn't that hard to read, but it was a little more effort-inducing."
My response: I tried to make the text a little clearer by downloading is as a jpeg and pdf. But my last and only resort that worked was taking a screenshot and pasting it onto the post.
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